Writing is starting to improve but I can’t get my head around some majorly poorly written plot problems. Like this chick said earlier that she knew of the fae because she had heard of them. Then suddenly she exclaims she is fae?! The book just seems quickly written like the author was doing meth and was like “yeah i can write a 5 series book”
— Apr 08, 2025 08:08PM
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