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This reads as though the author is trying to cover all their “diversity” bases. Feels performative.

Please tell me this was inspired by Muriel from Courage the Cowardly Dog lol

Is this literally “Kindred”?

Okay but seriously where is everyone

I’ve come to learn this about myself: I hate multi POV stories where they’re all introduced back to back and the POV switched every 2 pages. I literally can’t remember who’s who. Maybe it’s just me though idk

Oh these women are vile

Girl???

Great writing but the back and forth is a little much

Oh yeah Peter’s the villain for sure

It’s giving “Lord of the Flies” (and I love LOTF)

My girl is going THROUGH it

I’m terribly bored

The writing is making me cringe a littlr

Oh this is SPICY

Every time I open this, it’s like tuning into a really good show

No because I’m about to cry

this man can build a cool sci-fi world but he cannot write women well

(Back at this until my library hold releases). Too many characters being introduced at once is hurting my head a little

NOW it’s getting good!