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I’m really enjoying this book! One gripe: occasionally old characters are referred to as if we’re supposed to remember who they are but I have no idea who they are. For instance, suddenly there is a Kayla brought up as if we should be familiar with her and other than a vague remembrance of someone with tattoos, I have no ideawhy I should remember her.

AI narration : Not terrible but not great. Better than you would think.

Story issue: Why does she act like a 19th century novel character when she was raised on a southern farm? Ridiculous and annoying.
Narration issue: bed=bAd head=hAd sense=sAnts
Why does the cat speak with a British accent? Is that the only way to sound haughty?

Why did the Walkers take such a circuitous route to Ouray?

So far so good. Love this story (well, enjoy, even though it's dark and sad) but don't see how it could possibly still have so much left!

Omg, the stereotypes in this book are overwhelming. And the narrator has a nice voice but sounds so robotic.

Repeatedly saying “the victim” is redundant and annoying.

Why wouldn't she want to talk to him in person, esp in light of her current situation. And she doesn't "see evil in people" like the synopsis says. She simply is gifted at knowing how to use her art & perspective to subtly influence the viewer.

"I knew her better than she knew herself... she needed to be with someone to be held and guided" EW! This guy is PISSING ME OFF!

Wow, way to make assumptions AND lie, Simon! Just leap on the first person who didn't like the victim ... basically do the same thing the other terrible detective did to Clara... *sigh*

Wow, way to make assumptions AND lie, Simon! Just leap on the first person who didn't like the victim ... basically do the same thing the other terrible detective did to Clara... *sigh*

For real? First convo and such ham-handed hints and Claire is buying it, in spite of being "paranoid"? I really hope the conversations and story movement get better than this. I AM liking the parrallel but different relationships between the two women and their fathers, and the way they view their fathers.

For real? First convo and such ham-handed hints and Claire is buying it, in spite of being "paranoid"? I really hope the conversations and story movement get better than this.

Irritating: She now knows that her people have no idea how things work in the Primal/God realm, yet she still thinks their plan on how to stop the rot is her duty and makes sense? This is completely illogical. Plus, as far as I remember, it was never even well explained WHY they think it will work. He's so caring etc, if Primals can fix things like his dad did, why doesn't she just ask him what can be done about it?

Great twist!

I'm tired of Ty acting like a spoiled brat and expecting his brother to take care of him and do all the hardest work, especially when he wasn't even supposed to come. He takes him completely for granted. And the princess isn't just charmingly strong-willed. She's rude, obnoxious, and doesn't behave as someone who was trained to be a leader.

I don't think I can finish this... and I finish everything. This woman doesn't sound like a nurse, and the idea that a "hero" thinks it's ok to physically threaten this woman is disgusting. But the worst is his "even though I slept with the poor young girls being trafficked for sexual purposes over the last few years, I was never ACTUALLY attracted to any of them"!! WTAF?

"Stereotypes are usually true" WHAT?!?! NO ma'am, that's no ok.

Matthias can't pronounce the king of Ravka's last name and it's making me crazy. Also, the narrators are individually great, but the way they are inconsistent at the different characters is annoying. Maybe fewer narrators for more consistency in speech patterns/accents? I need to READ the series next time, rather than listening, I think.