idk if i’m being too picky but “Voices echoed strangely off buildings, the words stretched and distorted, so that it was nearly impossible to tell where the speakers were or what exactly they were saying.” irks me as a sentence because i feel the second half isn’t … relevant. as in, that impossible discernment was apparent by the descriptors of ‘stretched and distorted’. maybe i just need to go to bed
— Oct 12, 2026 04:24AM
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