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Reads like an adult fiction novel. C seems very full of herself. Possible Mary Sue? I like Chaol. Lots of mention of dresses. like- A LOT. A lot of escape route planning, but no action yet. No proof of assassin, author just telling not showing.

Just finished the Raven Cycle. Not totally convinced I enjoyed the ending. I really loved all the other parts, except the end part.

Thoroughly entertaining so far. The humor is right up my alley, and the story started with a bang. It feels a lot like the Raven Boys trilogy, but more grown up- which happens to be exactly what I was looking for.

It gets cheesier by the minute. I'm barely wading through.

It's very...red orange brown. Poetic. Redundant. Irritating.

"Every minute you spend with someone gives them a part of your life and takes part of their lives" pg 65