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Story is very good, but it needs editing!!!! It’s ruining my experience. 😬😬😬😬😬😬 I’m thanking God for this one being free with KU, because if I had purchased this I’d be SO mad.

Feels like I’m reading the wrong book. I…dislike… Holden so much.

Y’all, I don’t mind cheating. I actually crave reading it in books… when it’s “well done”, somewhat understandable… but whatheactualfuck, man. Holden is pissing me off and I’m so disappointed. 👎🏼

I’m just 🤢🤮

I’m disgusted and extremely disappointed.
I loved Holden so much (Leo’s book) and I can’t stand him right now. 🤢

Ugh. I was LOVING this book so much, but there’s not enough drama nor groveling from the H. I’m TIRED. I just want to finish ASAP.

700 pages too long. And this is coming from someone who looooves thic books.

“I can’t help the small sigh of frustration that escapes. I don’t want the night to end. It’s only nine thirty, but we have a long drive and Brenna’s been curled up on the couch in her pajamas for the past half hour…”

See? She’s always frustrated with her kid. 💀💀💀
She’s only FIVE. 🙄

“Mommy?”
I sigh. It was a long day and my patience is wearing thin. “Yes, Brenna.”

Dude, she’s always like this with Brenna. 🙄

“Trust me, those women don’t look like that when they’re not layered with makeup and in front of a camera.” His gaze skates over my features—over a mouth that I’ve thought was too wide more than once, and eyes that seem too catlike, and a nose that is too pointed at certain angles. “They’re not like you.”


Ughhhh. 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

“And, God, you’re so . . . You took me completely by surprise, that first night I met you. I thought you were the most beautiful woman I’ve ever met.”


Finally something. 🥲

Where’s…. The………Romance? ☹️

Getting better.

I’m struggling with this one. Holy shit, I don’t mind slooow books, but this one… THIS ONE… so fuckingggggg REPETITIVE!!! I’m so BORED.

Dammit. You’re indeed pathetic.

The guy treated you like SHIT, didn’t grovel one fucking bit after that stupid stunt and now you’re saying “fuck it, let’s go to your place”. Because ooooof course you guys will talk, huh???? 💀

You’re a dumb, dumb, dumb girl, Camilla.
What a shame you became.

Holy shit, girl. Stop being such a doormat. For fuck’s sake. UGHHHH, man. It’s embarrassing.

I’m so fucking annoyed with this heroine.
Weak and pathetic.