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The FMC is annoying and dense. Her ex called her stupid I'd have to agree; there are so many obvious clues that the MMC really likes the FMC and she's constantly thinking of him as "her boss" and how she "should end it."

"when he ____, she nearly ovulated on the spot" isn't sexy the first time she thinks it, unless you have a breeding kink, and it's even less sexy the more times it's repeated. There are other ways to do the "made my ovaries explode" without it sounding cringy.