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I'm already confused. Torj says it's been 4 years and 9 months since the last time he's seen Wren, then recounts seeing her at the 1 year memorial and again about 2 years ago.

I feel like I've missed a novella, or at least a chapter. My biggest complaint at the end of book 2 was Lark not asking questions. Well, in book 3 she has those answers. No idea where they came from.

She's already eluded to her heritage, just who her family was. yet book 2 didn't answer that question. I was so frustrated by her not asking about this. my first question would have been, "what's my real name?"

1). Lark doesn't ask enough questions.
2) If Lark loves her sister, why doesn't she visit more often?
3). Needs better transition between scenes. I'm constantly thinking I missed a page.