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Ivy is so annoying, I have to take a star away. I also feel like this book is floundering.

this is so boring and doesn't she have an editor? keeps using I instead of me. You don't say "she invited I to lunch." so why would you say "she invited Mark and I to lunch"?

so far I want to throw both mc's in a pit.

sheesh writing is maybe two steps up from "see dog run"

seriously? I know the girl's first name. Let's wait at some random spot in the university for her. How big is this school? 100 people?!

curse 99 cents books again. i am so bored and the writing is blah.

so boring

could not finish

keyboarder is not interchangeable with keyboardist. It's like saying snowboardist.

This reads like a teenage girl's fantasy as written by the actual girl. Three gorgeous guys in love with her, one of them a famous actor. Eyeroll

I don't understand the great ratings. The writing is only so so and the author doesn't understand words she uses.

I find Scarlet to be a very tedious character and am trudging through to finish this.

The male main has the emotional maturity of a 20 year old even tho he is 30. Sheesh.

Writing is a bit contrived anf way too formal for an american. The mc sounds like an insecure, hormonal 16 year old

meh, lost the plot somewhere

meh

finding this character's 1st person pov somewhat dumbed down. Lack of personality or maybe too wishy washy. Hope it gets better.

Guessed there was a twist and what it was on page 117.

currently pissed that I did not read sample before buying overpriced book. The grammar and editing and seeming english as a second language writing are distracting from the story. Don't understand 5 stars when it completely lacks the eloquence say of Beautiful Disaster which was also indy.

I wish this current obsession with writing in first person would stop. Some authors just can't pull it off without making their characters sound like boring twits.

what happens in the middle is such a copout to triangle romances. Need a break from something I would normally finish in one day

what happens in the middle is such a copout when it comes to triangle romances

Hating the second person. Makes it seem like smut with no plot.