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Oof, when I start internally rewriting sentences to flow better and imagining how I'd do the story differently, it's usually a bad sign.

If I have to read the word "enigmatic" one more goddamned time...

And that not even the only repetitive thing.

Okay yeah no I just opened it on my kindle again and I can't anymore. I'm not expecting great writing from a goddamned Omegaverse smut book, but jfc.

This book is a fucking struggle. Was the writing always this bad?

Oh my god, is Renarin unconsciously mirroring Rlain with the humming? Brandon continues to get autism right and it makes me so happy.

Okay, this is poorly edited. Enjoying the book, but I've reported at least a dozen typos, might be creeping up on two dozen.

Lmao, two pages later Witch is telling her off. Good.

Did Surreal get replaced by a Skrull or something? She is wildly OOC.

Theran needs to spend some quality time with Daemon and Lucivar.

Or maybe Surreal.

Jfc I hate Theran.

Okay, literally everyone is being an absolute asshole to Cassidy. Wtf.

There is some seriously fucked up sexual violence in these books but I don't think I've ever seen such a healthy portrayal of love and friendship between men in any other piece of media. Saetan and Daemon, especially, show such love and trust.

Okay, wait, how in the hell did Theran bot recognize Saetan when Daemon is basically his carbon copy?

I'd forgotten how ridiculous this series can be:

"Once, [Saetan had] raised two sons, Mephis and Peyton."

Alright, calling it now: Eric is the killer.

I've never wanted to DNF a book this close to the ending.

So Hawthorne is going to use his magic elixir thingy on Thea at some point.

Let's see... Orphan, fated to die at 27, can somehow sense the royal magic... Pretty sure I know where this is going.

You can't use a longbow from a crouch wtf.

Nah. Uh-uh. No way in hell is she able to pull a long bow first try. I've done more research for a fanfic.

Turned the page and bow I get to see the FMCs full name yet again. Who edited this? (who am I kidding, it's fucking KU)

Say "celadon" again. I double dog dare you.

Okay so like, they made this big deal about there being white Ravens, and there were obviously broadcast hints that (and here I just realized I can't even remember the OFC's name) she's fated mates with Malyr and Debian based on scent. Author could be a bit less obvious.

Someone is going to try to stab Volga in her heart and they'll miss because it's in the wrong place. Sloppy broadcasting.

A Chuck Norris joke? What year is it? Is Chuck Testa next?

So in all of Ephraim's chapters until he meets Lyria in hers, he never once even alludes to his Bacchus pendant. Then suddenly it's there and he's touching it just so Lyria can ask about his history. Lazy.

Am... am I supposed to be on Darrow's side here?

Vargo is best boy and if he dies istg...

Okay Leo needs to become a "body found floating by the docks."

Uhhh, isn't Savine Jazel's illegitimate, unclaimed daughter? And Orso is his lawful son?

Ew. Ew ew ew.