It’s got a little better, the writing is still something to be desired, way too much repetition and redundant sentences, with some strange ways to describe things. Also some disjointed scene where I’m struggling to follow the movements of characters. The spicy scenes are good enough but not the best I’ve read, although there are a lot of them. I am however really enjoying the storyline and characters…
— Feb 19, 2026 04:53PM
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