I tried. I really tried, second attempt reading it, I got a few chapters in, but the writing is awful. Unnecessary information that adds nothing to the plot, some lines feel completely out of place and I’ve had to re-read thinking am I’m going crazy or did it definitely not make sense.
It just felt like rambling and like it hadn’t been thought through. A dot to dot with no actual image.
— Jul 17, 2025 12:54PM
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