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WHAT!!!!!

Girl I hate writing errors. How are Jay and Hud 14 in 1971 if they were born in 1960 so they should be 11??? And how is Nina 14 in 1971 as well when she was born in 1958 so she should be 13 at the most 😭 hire a proofreader

It’s getting repetitive and boring now… ok I get it, they have a secret, when’s the big reveal??

Girl… hire a proofreader. Page 157 - Duncan and Pete save Hannah from the bog and on page 167 when Pete gets stuck in the bog, Duncan tells Pete how he had to rescue Hannah earlier with Femi???

What’s up with the writing? I already know this book is definitely not for me

This is taking me so long to read and it’s only 200 pages. Why is there a story within a story, a story that the main character made up? Where’s the horror? When are they going to embark on that journey to find the dead body?

Reading this book feels like studying pictures of dead bodies at my work (I love it)

Idk if I’ll ever finish this book 🥲

The sentences and events make no sense

Where is the horror in this book? There should be SOMETHING happening by page 56 when it has only over 300 pages 😐