Carissa > Recent Status Updates

Im liking the story but not the way she’s choosing to have the characters speak. 😒

Can anyone tell me if this picks up? 250 pages in without much world building and a lot of back and forth with characters that I’m not latching onto…sooo…wondering 🧐

Sooooooo…not much is happening…does this pick up at some point??? 🤞🧐

It’s still world building but one of my biggest pet peeves is when we label a character something they’re not. Our FMC is *not* a rebel and she makes that clear early on but now everyone is referring to her as one, herself included. Ugh. Maybe this changes later but she wasn’t even arrested for being a rebel but now it’s all over her paperwork? Nope. Considered me annoyed. 😒Rant over 😆🤪

This had an interesting premise but I can already tell it’s gonna be 3 stars at best…🙃

Finally getting time to make some progress on this…hoping it gets better because so far…meh😒

Loving this palate cleanser🥰