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Not great. Abandoned around page 150. Underdeveloped characters and storyline. Vocabulary is weak and too simple. Felt as if a middle schooler wrote it.

Disturbing

Abandon.

Couldn’t get into it so I abandon this book.

Too many inconsistencies in her storyline. she told Jeremy she was a writer. Few pages later it reads that she was in grad school and became a writer after that didn’t workout. Silly but annoying. It irritates me that the author herself or the editor didn’t pick up on these. It starts with us had one too.