I'm enjoying it so far; the story and magic system are interesting, but Rachel's writing sometimes feels a bit childish, even TikTok-esque. And the names, my God, the names of the places and characters are terrible, like they're genuinely ugly. Why did she choose such bad names? I'm enjoying the rhythm, then I read the name Ravyn or Spindle or Blunder and I'm immediately thrown off.
— Jul 20, 2025 04:33PM
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