I'm far enough that I feel confident in saying that Broom of the System has a major pacing issue that makes it incredibly difficult to read. I love the little vignettes but they do not feel like they are accumulating to anything. I almost feel like it's a series fictional conversations, that are mostly insulated, that could be read as short stories connected by the same characters. It's good but it's no page turner.
— Jan 14, 2025 02:14PM
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