chapter 16 featured the word 'hockey' 12 times. it was 7 pages long. I'm not sure why we've moved from povs from Maya, the arguably more interesting character due to her position as an outsider and as the victim of a deeply traumatic event, to instead focus on her middle-aged father who can't move on from the hobby he picked up as a child. "just give me one more season" how about you get a life Peter.
— Jan 19, 2026 06:19PM
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