Okay so the writing has gonna better and I luv the idea behind this story I really do and I am gonna continue reading it, but it still somewhat kinds off as if this was the very first book they ever wrote and published. Concept is good tho, and the character chemistry is great but also.... why are they both jumping back in when David is pretty much still in same situation he was in when he was 18 or 19.
— Nov 09, 2024 08:48AM
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