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Boring and tedious so far

Aaaaaa the errors are SO BAD.
Suddenly he doesn't remember a conversation he had not 24h ago - where he said he was the little girls father- and blabs "I mean I could be her father, maybe" in his head.
Really?
It's hard to read with faults that grand...

There are so many contingency faults in here... It needed an editor.

This is weird... Like a James Joyce train of thought but with a lot of repetition, and unnecessary jabberings about boring people...
And the sex is not sexy. At all. She keeps interrupting it with blabbing about... About anything really. And then thinks you can resume it by writing "I was so horny uh oh I'm there"
Also she has a very specific fetish where she can come through blow jobs, highly unrealistic...

OMG, this is so ridiculous and utter rubbish... I'm so sad I was hoping it would be as good as the cruel Prince... And alas its just stupid, childish, dragging on and the female lead cries and cries and cries. We're well over 20 times now.
Sigh

If she cries and stands by like a damsel in distress one more time I might stop reading. This is really really annoying....