This Cullinane Bar-El 'romance' in the first chapter is just...unnecessary. Also, a number of these paragraphs should be in that "man writes about a woman" site. He grabs her and kisses her, she pulls away and laughs, then she slaps him and concludes with sobbing on his chest.
Gross. The first chapter is set in the 60s; It shouldnt be this bad.
— May 13, 2021 08:30AM
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