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I hate when characters lie to me in their own heads.

Krista better have a real good reason for doing all this psychological warfare

A real talent of writing the most blood-boiling irritating situations and people. I need a break.

Perition for men to leave poor Yeong-hye alone.

The narrator is kind of annoying :/

there's more? :/

I'm not buying him as a character, he's too self-aware.

lord, she gives me anxiety

I think we should gatekeep writing, actually, with these people, instead of encouraging them to write their own book.

The problem with not clearly sticking to a narrator is that I'm on Book 2 and I can't trust that it's not just Phillip inventing shit

narc alert

Kind of annoyed at how short everything is. The chapters, the sentences. I like Rosemary.

ok ok I'm not immersed. i just think that it's so dumb. i gotta take a break and come back to it when I'm feeling less combative.

All they do is drink (so much) and bitch at each other. I'm not very taken by the story yet, I gotta say.

"I'm staying far away from that man." ~Foreshadowing is a literary device~

Yes, yes, as expected, but if she forgives him for it I will have to write the author a strongly worded letter.

Just imagining the other Hunstmen, stuck through this journey having to politely ignore all of ~that~.

>>When you're in a murder forest infested with vampires and your captain is provoking a teenager instead of shutting up, amirite guys???

Please don't let him be an Atlantean who's like hundreds of years old, she's eighteen, I'm preemptively tired.

The Oprah chapter is jarring.

"-I am always out of the way when any thing desirable is going on; always the last of my family to be noticed."

I dearly hope I'm not a Mary.