Ryan Windham > Recent Status Updates

While so far very enjoyable, I'm starting to notice that this book could have use another round of editing. A lot Grammer and occasional spelling errors. More importantly, it looks like people and places are getting mixed up, making so that I have to reread something to understand what us being talked about. Very much feels they rushed the editing to meet the release deadline, but I rather they had waited.

I'm not done with this book yet but I can already tell Shari isn't going to acknowledge how the LDS Church, especially because rhey have so much influence in that town, was one of the reason that DCFS never got involved despite the multitude of concerns made by her and neighbors.