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"She smiled, feeling warm and beautiful and protected in his strong arms." Really? *sigh* I'm in too deep to back out now, but that line made me cringe.

Don not dealing with his issues is literally giving me secondhand anxiety like this is not okay

"My love for Rosie was so powerful that it had caused my brain to make a grammatical error." How sweet.

"To the reader: thank you. You're going to bloodydamn love these books." Yeah, um, don't be so cocky, Mr. Brown. So far, I'm not that impressed. Seems like he's trying too hard to be eloquent. Plus he overuses "bloodydamn." I mean, I get it dude, you invented your own swear word, good for you.

Oh boy, look at this gem: "Oh, how I love you, dear Kevin. Seeing you these last three days has reminded me how desperately I love you. Please, please tell me you will slay this dragon. We will, Kevin. Together we will slay this beast, my knight." I kid you not, those are actual lines from this book. Not impressed.

Wondering if this is real...it's so jarringly different, and maybe not in a good way. Confusing, very poor flow..hopefully it'll get better from here on out.

"...glowing bank of hot emotional coals." Seriously?!

Mildly interesting, although I think there's way too much science and too little action. I mean, he did his research, woot, but seriously. Repetition is grating on my nerves. "said Kira." "asked Kira." "said Kira." "asked Kira." Not to be cynical but GO AWAY KIRA.