Not gonna lie. This first 10% has been brutal to get through. The writing is bad. I mean BAD. The story so far is enjoyable enough that I want to know what happens next. The whole attempt at the disability angle for the main character is a bit weak. She kinda just comes across as a bit of a whiney loser, rather than someone with actual impediments. I have laughed out loud so many times at just plainly stupid stuff.
— Nov 23, 2025 02:24PM
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