Okay, I'm only 20 pages in, but I'm going to have to DNF this one if it doesn't cool it with the adjectives and adverbs. Not every thing/action has to be described to death.
And really, we get it. This is a big woman. 6'1", Amazonian, needs a big chair, heavy-boned, curvaceous, size 18, surprising, fascinating-but-terrifying, well-padded, huge, large-but-shapely ... you've used them all. In just 20 pages. Yeesh.
— Jul 24, 2025 12:16AM
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