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i kind of hate how this author writes 😭 she’ll write a whole scene for a character, and then that character goes and recaps the entire thing again to someone else. it’s so redundant and makes the plot move SO slowly. overall just very overwritten

a little corny and reads very middle grade….

if he says “little conduit” one more time i’m gonna riot

DONT LOOK AT ME

this is reading like a middle grade disney channel movie and if it keeps going like this it might be a DNF🥴

IM SO BORED