I haven’t had much time to read but I’m hoping to finish this soon! I did find an editing error. There’s a sentence where the main character is talking about how someones hospice room doesn’t have any security. They even point out that the door to her room “isn’t even closed.” The very next line is “we push it open and step inside.”
I’m not pointing it out to be mean! Just thought it was funny!
— Jul 29, 2021 08:58PM
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