Have to DNF. Tell me why the quotes are ‘like this’… that’s not a real quote. It unfortunately reads like it was self-published (it was), there’s typos and errors littered through it. the prose is very wordy and the dialogue feels inauthentic. forced at best. i really really wanted to like this one because of tiktok, but i can’t get past all the mistakes.
— Nov 06, 2025 11:11AM
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