It’s not glaringly distracting but there’s something subtly odd about the way he writes Alondra… almost an objectivity, but like in manner as if he’s not trying to be but in doing so, is.
If that makes sense.
Almost trying to be too respectful and giving her high regard but in doing so is just placing her on a shelf instead of being another person in the story.
Not overtly… but there is a weird vibe.
— Feb 15, 2026 11:02AM
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