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I see why a lot of reviews talk about the confusing jumps and skips in the writing. I just read a scene three times because it did not make sense. I like this book but it will not be getting a 5 star that’s for sure

Buddy I get you’re traumatized but you’re inability to make a decision as a captain is giving me serious secondhand embarrassment

8 pages in and this book needs like 12 more rounds of edits. The dangling modifiers and non-parallel structures are killing me.

Love love love. I keep pausing to write down quotes I love or think about things. I only read 27 pages in an hour because it’s such a thinker!