Alright over 30% in and things have started to falter just a little, felt like things went from 0 to 100 way too quickly to feel believable and the cause of Miki’s scars felt a little forced but I’m curious to see where things go, I don’t expect master level prose or writing when reading these kind of books so I’m willing to excuse some of the weak writing
— Jan 12, 2026 09:17AM
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