I've noticed the writer seems to forget how he's described things in previous pages. I've consistently attributed it to perception of various characters but it is somewhat jarring. One moment a character is withering away, skin and bones and whatnot, the next she is the image of youth and beauty. The descriptions seem to fit whatever he is trying to convey at the time, continuity be damned.
— Feb 01, 2024 07:17AM
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