I need to talk to you, Hannah.
Yes, Lisa?
Well, Hannah…
Go ahead, Lisa..
Okay, Hannah..
Every sentence of dialogue includes the name of who they are speaking to as if we’ve forgotten or just plain can’t keep up😪
Half the book must be dedicated just to names
But I’ve committed to finishing this book. Just a little more ..
— Mar 06, 2022 02:22AM
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