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Modern Japan and the war on body hair.

Language is a little clunky sometimes but I'm interested in this world. (Also main chara is full of herself, but she's young enough that I can give her a pass)

Language is a little clunky sometimes but I'm interested in this world. (Also main chara is full of herself, but she's young enough that I can give her a pass)

Helping convince me that I really am in the middle of the extrovert/introvert scale (with occasional tilts to one side or the other). Good stuff.

Maybe I'm just a cynic but my reaction was "yeah, of course their marriage isn't working"

Totally picturing Godfrey Gao as Magnus Bane. With glitter.

The pacing is good, story interesting, but if the author was in my writing group I would have told her to lay off the adverbs

The pacing is good, story interesting, but if the author was in my writing group I would have told her to lay off the adverbs

This is my bath reading book since Mortal Instruments is an e-copy :). Interesting to read this and Mortal Instruments at the same time as even though they were written many years apart the audience and basic premise is similar.

Wondering: Is Gary Stu hooking up with Constitutional Protector woman going to have any relevance to the story? Also, the translator probably shouldn't have changed tenses when going on a page long description of Swedish government structure bc that made it real obvious it wasn't in the original.

Slow to get started, but I can't stop reading now

TEAM ASHA

I bet the Dornish have some wild parties

Brienne and Jaime bromance 4 the win

Am unsure what the point of all the love life explication is because it has nothing to do with the conflict or character development really