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Tibris is giving shady energy…

And I’m done. Her friend and the male mc gang up behind her back to decide what’s best for her? All after he - a 30 year old man - throws a temper tantrum at his moms house bc he is pissed for being friend zoned bc she’s been honest about needing time before getting in a relationship??? Real catch there 👏🏼

Andddddd I spoke too soon, or was letting the wine get to me…the mcs first intimate scene was so cringe. He knew she was uncomfortable so he decides to tell her what she wants ???? The fuuuu…Also so many grammatical errors… pedal instead of petal, shutter instead of shudder…I just…can’t with kindle unlimited books anymore. Get what you pay for.

Omg…this was so much better than I expected, I guess the free kindle books I’ve been reading are total dog crap and I hadn’t realized how bad, bc this took me by complete surprise. Great opening hook, and aside from a few cringe “women who like sports are treasured gems” moments, I’m super excited to see how this goes.

Too much backstory in the beginning, also Caleums intro felt fake and forced. Writing in general feels like this was self published without an editor looking over it.