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Yep, definitely grooming. In chapter 23 we learn that the Bargainer does like Callie, an under age minor… and he’s a centuries old fae. He professes that he doesn’t want to wait another year… but then he pulls away. Chapter 22 reveals that they’re soul mates (Callie is 24 years old in this chapter)
But yep.. this gives me the ick

So Desmond (the bargainer) has given me the ick because he knew a young Callie had a crush on him, and now that she's older and legal he's flirting with her; it's giving PDFiles and grooming

So sick of the chapters dedicated to kissing Jason and how much the FMC keeps going on and on about it. Get on with the spice or the story

So far the writing consists of Eve and Ashers constant passion (it's getting boring), and the way Fiona's accent has been written is terrible. She sounds more Jamaican than English, quite offensive really... Hopefully it improves