Loving the creepy.. reads like a literotica lol and is kinda cringe but I loved the descriptions of the creepiness I feel like she’s kinda doing too much. Like she called a tank top and camysol with a Y does every fantasy name have to have an extra y? Interested in what’s going to happen we’ve been in the rising action for like 200 days
— Nov 16, 2024 11:21PM
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