First off, not liking the FMC so far. She's too confident. As in, irritatingly so.
Secondly, the bullying seems a bit excessive and superfluous. There's no background for the way they're bullying her, and the way they're bullying just seems extreme, if it's simply because she has no powers and therefore is an easy target. Hope we get a bit more context.
I would have DNFd it, but I'm gonna give it a shot.
— Sep 28, 2024 11:27AM
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