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I was worried with the Prologue. Feels like the editor forgot to edit it. The chapter was great but the writing was horrible. "She did this" "She went there" "she grabbed the phone" and then any dialogue was her saying "fk....fk....fk". Pushed through to chapter 1 and the writing style changed completely for the best. So far enjoying this wild ride of a crazy horrific story. Got to chapter 7 in one sitting. Gripping!

Almost feels like they forgot to edit the Prologue and I almost stopped reading mid way. The chapter itself is great but every sentence was "she did this" "she did that" and when saying something, every line is her saying F**k. I thought this was going to be one of those amateur, poorly written attempts but pushed through and now in Chap 7. So far the book is a WILD ride. Writing got better and story is CRAZY GOOD.

Not sure why this book is getting less than 4.0 stars. So far the story is great and gripping. I truly enjoy how Alex writes and breaks his book parts, chapters and chapter sections and works well with this story.