Do kids their age actually talk like this? No. Do I care? Not really ‘cause the writing is really good so far.
Loving the little single page story but damn was the font hard to read. I don’t know if it’s the edition I have or that it’s not the brightest where I’m reading. It’s beautiful don’t get me wrong, all it needed to be was bolder. But how did that not get caught in the process of publishing?
— Jan 12, 2025 05:08PM
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