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Mano isso tá insalubre kkkkk. Todo mundo é gay nessa merda e eu simplesmente odeio quando fazem isso em fanfics, bem realista graças a deus. E o enredo é tão inexistente e parado, eu realmente estou continuando esse “livro” na força do ódio pq coloquei a meta de fazer nada pela metade esse ano. Mas acho que não vai ter jeito aqui, não faz sentido eu ler por ler.

Okay also it is so clearly written by a bisexual millennial woman, it’s ridiculous. From the way she uses Shane as a YN version of herself/the reader to the unrealistic LGBTQ representation. I could expand on the first, but won’t right now. There are so many ridiculous lines that I regret not highlighting for when I could use a quick laugh. But they genuinely took me out of the story and pissed me off.

This kind of sucks ass. The characters (specially Shane) are poorly developed and every single chapter is packed with extensive, detailed sex scenes. If I was on ao3, I’m certain the tag #noplotjustprn would be present in the description and even then I’d consider it a pretty average fanfic. I don’t even know why I’m still reading this book to be honest, the overall writing is quite bad as well.