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I can't finish, the writing is lacking, and the characters are bland...
It's like drinking grapefruit juice and pretending it's wine

how does it keep getting worse. amo doesn't know how to write a straight book, i feel like I'm reading at least five books at the same time.
things just "pop up" with zero explanation.
a character we never read about gets in the book and makes zero sense

if i read until the 20% mark and don't understand shit, im stopping

until now, maximus has been the highlight of the book
sara is honestly very bland... the poor girl has zero personality