Not bad so far but wow it feels a bit like reading an encyclopaedia. Nothing is left to the imagination. I feel like I’m drowning in over-explained backstory. The world is cool but is in no way presented organically.
Lots of edge too! Too much swearing! I don’t mind swearing but there seems to be a curse to page ratio of 1:1.
Going to stick with it despite my worries. I’m hoping it gets better soon.
— Aug 13, 2022 10:15PM
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