Some comments:
- This is giving reader insert Wattpad fanfiction, and not the good kind
- Kai calling Paedyn “darling” gives me the ick
- Him touching her hair is gross
- Challenge #1: how many times can a character say delusional in one paragraph
- The fact that they’re currently competing and have time to sew each other back up again after every wound seems wildly unrealistic to me- how are they not dead yet
— Jun 17, 2025 07:14PM
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