What stands out to me is the sheer amount of info dumping. I’m not saying it’s because the book is fanfiction and can no longer rely on prior knowledge, but I am saying it’s somewhat boring thus far. A lot of time is spent trying to make me care about Luc, but I don’t know enough about him to care that he’s dead. Maybe I’d care if he was, say, Harry Potter, but he’s not (allegedly).
— Nov 26, 2025 07:54PM
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