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Americans don’t say whilst every paragraph. And we don’t wear dressing gowns or jumpers.

This book is honestly torturous to read. It’s repetitive and I’m forcing my way through it.

“Though I never established the Muse brothers’ paternity with certainty, months later I discovered the name of their paternal grandmother…”
Huh?
Why is the writing so confusing? Just tell us their story, not the long winding road to get there. These could have been footnotes on the research.