p. 29, “The next one of Ivan’s opponents is a small child, a girl, who can’t be more than 11.”
p.31, “With a broad beaming smile full of milk teeth she accepts, and they shake.”
Ma’am, this is such a silly detail to eff up, the age by which children start to lose their milk (baby) teeth, and you are otherwise so surgical with your words. I am shook.
— Dec 20, 2024 01:28PM
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