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Ugh I really hate when books aren’t in first person because like who is who and wtf is going on… like I never know what the hell is actually going on so many “she said” “he said” and like when did this new character enter and who tf is this character and it just all pmo

I’m having a hard time liking Lee.. she’s just very crybaby and “everything is about me and only my feelings matter” and it’s annoying. I find her immature. Please get better

Eh idk… I feel like the writing is very amateur 🥸 the male pov is like basically reading a females pov.. like he’s a hockey player but his character is giving off very soft and polite vibes. I don’t like it.