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Okay I like the plot…BUT NOT the hero. Owen Chesterfield is written to be a ninny. An incompetent male that is always saying foolish things and making women dislike him. His dialogue sounds like some prissy guy who can’t do anything as heroic as protect or save Camilla.

Boring. Incredibly boring.
And I don’t agree with some of the things. She kisses a man when she’s engaged to another. All for the sake of romance in a book. I don’t agree with that and that’s putting impure things in the reader’s mind. Saying it’s okay because it’s romantic.
And why are the heroine and hero made to fall for each other when the hero’s wife is alive!? Morally wrong.

Loveee it!